- Your proposal is lacking wireframes and how the UI elements will interact needs to also be included here.
- Your proposal is lacking details
- No need for a REST API and even if there was, you need details.
- Without doublespacing, this is like 3-4 pages, which is insufficient for a proposal that we’d accept. Don’t double-space please – it’s very obvious that your proposal is lacking in detail.
- Your GCI credentials are better left off the proposal, while you learned from it, it’s not going to bump you up
- You are working too many hours weekly – 72 hours/ week is insane…you can’t sustain that long-term and you will burn out. Scope things out that you can work 40 hours per week.
- Why do you need a REST API? What is its purpose? What endpoints will the REST API have if you used it? Things like this need to be in your proposal.
Ultimately we select the student with the most realistic proposal and yours is not it at this moment.
Please read the following post and revise your propsoal, as it stands, it’s not fantastic.